Audience questionairre

I decided I would do the questionnaire using Facebook and set it to everyone so I can link it here.

http://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=188126077900149

These are all screen grabs from the questionnaire.

Photo storyboard

close up dolly of legs

medium shot with all three characters in

close up shot

extra close up shot

medium-close up shot

medium two shot

long tracking shot

medium shot from behind

Shooting script

 Scene 1
1. Close up shot
2. Close up shot in different location

scene 2
3. Medium shot from side
4. Close up shot
5. Medium shot
6. Close up shot- reverse shot
7. Medium close up shot from front
8. Medium-close up shot
9. Medium-long shot (establishing)
10. Close up from front
11.  Close up from side (match on action)
12. Close up from front
13. Medium shot
14. Close up
15. Medium shot (shot reverse shot)
16. Close up
17.Medium shot (shot reverse shot)
18. Close up
19.Close up from front
20. Medium shot
21. Tracking shot long shot (establishing)
22. Medium shot (with zooming out)
23. Close up shot
24. Medium shot

Location shots

Main street, Goldthorpe. Used for the walking scene in the film.

Alley way, Goldthorpe. Used in dragging scene.

Different location of Main street. Used in dragging scene.

 

 

 The previous 4 photos are from a lock up in Barnsley, this location was chosen as it looked abandoned and was not in the best of conditions. It looks like it could be quite dodgy and I felt it was a good location to film the gun scene.

Storyboard

Close up legs dragged, camera movement in direction of arrow

Close up of gun to the back of the head

Long establishing shot

Close up from front

Close up of gun to the back of the head

Tracking shot of characters walking down the street.

long shot from zoom in to out whilst walking towards camera

long shot from behind characters as the walk past camera and zoom in from out

List of tricky shots

Tracking shots
Aerial shots
Dolly shots
Zoom shots

These are a few of the shots we wanted to include within the film, we managed to get some zooms in and a tracking shot, however the other two were unachievable but possibly could be included later in a full length film.

Full length treatment

Programme: Pretty Violence
Duration: 100mins approx

Audience: Those interested in a British crime thriller, those who enjoy films with action, will interest female gender as it is based on female drug gang

Resume: A man who has stolen drugs from a feared female drug gang is taken to a secluded lock up where he is at gun point in order for Abbie and Eveline to find out where the drugs are the man has stolen. The man reveals that Big Mickey, a notorious local gangster has the drugs, however this does not save the man and he is shot by Abbie.
The girls meet up with the rest of the gang in a pub where they reveal where the cocaine is. They then come up with a plan to get the drugs back and pay Big Mickey a little revenge. The girls track down people who know Big Mickey and beat them up for information on where the drugs are hidden and try to find out his location. Big Mickey finds out that the girls are after him and sends out some of his men to deal with them, the group go after the drugs first but one of the girls is killed brutally in the process. Abbie and Eveline in vengeance seek Big Mickey and go to his headquarters, they kill some of the guards without Big Mickey realising. The girls enter Mickey's office, they shout at him and threaten to kill him. Abbie points the gun at Mickey, he also grabs a gun under his desk, he quickly pulls it out and shoots. They both have been shot, Mickey is dead whilst Abbie is bleeding on the ground with Eveline clutching her. The film ends.

Suggested Elements:

a) British female drug gang

b) Violence, blood and gun crime

c) drug use and dealing

d) British locations

e) Narration